This is the audio recording of Binary Productions Treatment feedback.
This is our entire Treatment being read out in front of a small audience.
I have listed all of the feedback that was given and our answers as well. This feedback has been shorted to more appropriate answers.
1) Adam Hemingway
You said the you were filming at the Ramada, do you have permission?
Answer
You can just get Chris to walk up to the building and film him and film Chris entering the building then cut that scene and film somewhere else, you know just to get an establishing shot.
2) Grant Tonks
How would you film Chris whilst facing the mirror?
Answer
In the film that Josh did last year, if you slightly tilt and change the angle of the camera you can film Chris directly towards him and not see the camera.
3) Grant Tonks
Who's playing the son (Chris)?
Answer
Not sure yet, but we need some one who can drive or we can get another person who can drive and film at a distance and all that you would be able to see is the outline of the driver and not the actual actor playing Chris, I have done this before!
4) Adam Hemingway
You know that you repeat the same scenes, won't that get a bit teidous?
Answer
No becuse there would be slight difference's between scene's and shots and also we would edit the repeat day differently to the first for example speeding up the repeated scene' like in GroundHog's Day.
5) Mr Hood
Do you have access to a stair lift?
Answer
Yes.
6) Mr Hood
How are you going to start the car on the 3rd time?
Answer
we would probably just start the car normally and just cut the sound then bring the sound back in on the '3rd' try in sound editing.
7) Mr Hood
Do you know this GroundHog Day type thing. Are you going to use the same shots?
Answer
As long as we can show a bit of change in some of the scenes and the second part is edited effectively, for example make it stand out for the scene we want to repeat and show the difference's for the new slightly changed scene's.
We want to put the audiences feedback to effect and so we are going to change our treatment to suit the need and make clear points that are difficult to understand.
